Let’s ignore #24 and go right to #25. Nothing happens in #24 and it’s painful to read.
Not that 25 is any better. Rick Jones’ dialog is so stilted towards being a hipster that it completely distracts from the story. This panel shows what I mean.
The story itself isn’t terrible. Skrulls disguise themselves as Mar-Vell’s friends and family members in order to drive him crazy. It’s a decent idea. I’m shocked it hasn’t been used more.
Unfortunately, it’s not done very well. But still, #25 is better than most Captain Marvel books. Not that that’s saying very much. And at least it has art by Jim Starlin.